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August 25~ IAN BROWNLIE

8/25/2025

 
Welcome back, poetry fans! Today SHINE is putting the spotlight on UK-based writer, Ian Brownlie. I admire the simplicity of these pieces which really pack a punch. Enjoy! Thank you, Ian, for sharing your love of words with SHINE international poetry series.

the audience is waiting

i leave
my completed
crossword grids
at the foot
of hedgerows
because how else
could i allow so many people
to see my work

alas the magic is gone

the magic is gone
alas
alack
the house white as a newborn swan
was mercy-burned
as mercy dashed
back deep inside
interred by glass

down unbirthed panes
faint tracks of tears
roll back roll back
tattooing smears
roll back roll back
that then erupt
roll back roll back
their trip a sham
roll back roll back
that ends unseen
roll back roll back

the magic is gone
alas

dream machine

i dreamed they’d invented a machine
that could punch deep square holes into the earth

the transparent coffins were lowered mechanically
down
ready to pop back up at the touch of a button
if a loved-one was passing by
and felt the urge to see the person they’d lost
rescue them
from the earth

awake now
thinking what a clever use of space
thinking about the effect of memory on grief

but the dream failed to address key concerns
one
was the person in the coffin preserved naked or clothed
two
could anyone press the button to temporarily release
a person from the earth
three
there might be too many visitors
at once
or too few

it wasn’t a perfect dream
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Ian Brownlie is a writer/poet from the UK. He can be found on BlueSky: @ianbrownlie.bsky.social.

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    Stars Over the Dordogne

    Stars are dropping thick as stones into the twiggy
    Picket of trees whose silhouette is darker
    Than the dark of the sky because it is quite starless.
    The woods are a well. The stars drop silently.
    They seem large, yet they drop, and no gap is visible.
    Nor do they send up fires where they fall
    Or any signal of distress or anxiousness.
    They are eaten immediately by the pines.

    Where I am at home, only the sparsest stars
    Arrive at twilight, and then after some effort.
    And they are wan, dulled by much travelling.
    The smaller and more timid never arrive at all
    But stay, sitting far out, in their own dust.
    They are orphans. I cannot see them. They are lost.
    But tonight they have discovered this river with no trouble,
    They are scrubbed and self-assured as the great planets.

    The Big Dipper is my only familiar.
    I miss Orion and Cassiopeia's Chair. Maybe they are
    Hanging shyly under the studded horizon
    Like a child's too-simple mathematical problem.
    Infinite number seems to be the issue up there.
    Or else they are present, and their disguise so bright
    I am overlooking them by looking too hard.
    Perhaps it is the season that is not right.

    And what if the sky here is no different,
    And it is my eyes that have been sharpening themselves?
    Such a luxury of stars would embarrass me.
    The few I am used to are plain and durable;
    I think they would not wish for this dressy backcloth
    Or much company, or the mildness of the south.
    They are too puritan and solitary for that--
    When one of them falls it leaves a space,

    A sense of absence in its old shining place.
    And where I lie now, back to my own dark star,
    I see those constellations in my head,
    Unwarmed by the sweet air of this peach orchard.
    There is too much ease here; these stars treat me too well.
    On this hill, with its view of lit castles, each swung bell
    Is accounting for its cow. I shut my eyes
    And drink the small night chill like news of home.

    ~~~

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